Working on Your First Page? Here’s Good Advice

Writers in the Storm often supply good lessons. This is a particularly cogent first-page critiqueWoman writing that takes aim at some my worst foibles: too many metaphors, authorial intrusions, details readers don’t need, details they do need–what about you? How would you rate this first page?

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Filed under Editing, indie publishing, Learning to write, novels, Plot Development, Print on Demand, self editing, Self-publishing, style, Writing

2 responses to “Working on Your First Page? Here’s Good Advice

  1. Thanks for sharing Laura’s post! – for Writers in the Storm

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